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Interpreting Poetry: Not Waving But Drowning

Interpreting Poetry

Keristy Nieto | Published: September 24th, 2020 by K20 Center

  • Grade Level Grade Level 11th, 12th
  • Subject Subject English/Language Arts
  • Course Course A.P. Language and Composition, A.P. Literature and Composition, British Literature, Composition, Creative Writing
  • Time Frame Time Frame 2-3 class period(s)
  • Duration More 100 minutes

Summary

This lesson will provide students with a personal understanding of Stevie Smith's poem, "Not Waving but Drowning." Students will practice inferencing and analytical skills during this lesson. Students will be assessed by utilizing a graphic organizer and a writing prompt encouraging a personal relationship with the poem. While this lesson is currently aligned only to 11th grade standards, it would be appropriate to teach in grades 11 through 12, adjusting standards as needed.

Essential Question(s)

How does our worldview shape how we view ourselves?

Snapshot

Engage

Students will use the instructional strategy Agreement Circles to discuss whether people are generally understood or misunderstood.

Explore

Students will read "Not Waving but Drowning" as a class.

Explain

Students will utilize "Literature Graffiti," a graphic organizer, to analyze the poem.

Extend

Students will create a two-minute paper relating his/her life to the protagonist in the poem.

Evaluate

Students will use the RAFT strategy to demonstrate higher order thinking while analyzing the poem.

Materials

  • Computer with speakers and projector

  • Copy of text (or 12th grade OKCPS literature book)

  • Copies of Literature Graffiti graphic organizer and Student RAFT Self-Evaluation handouts

  • Attached PowerPoint

  • Writing materials: pens, pencils, paper, etc.

Engage

10 Minute(s)

To begin the lesson, engage students in a strategy called Agreement Circles. Begin by instructing all students to stand, then read the following statement: “People misunderstand each other." If students agree with the statement, they are to stand in the center of the circle. If they disagree with the statement, they are to stand on the outside of the circle. Allow students to talk to their "face partner" for 30 seconds each between statements. Repeat with the following statements: #2— “People are lonely.” #3—”You see what's around you.” #4—'“Two people can see the same thing and interpret something completely different.”

The statements for the Agreement Circles are posed in slides 3-6 of the attached Lesson Slides.

Explore

30 Minute(s)

The class will listen to Stevie Smith’s poem "Not Waving but Drowning."

After the initial reading, go to slide 7 and have the class discuss initial interpretations of the poem. Discussion questions may include the following

  1. Who is the speaker of the poem? Who does the speaker align himself with- the drowning man or the onlookers?

  2. What is the effect of repetition in the poem?

  3. By altering the first stanza’s final phrase, what does Smith suggest about the life of the drowned man?

  4. Smith’s poem asks us to think about the ways in which we misunderstand or misread the people around us. What opinion does the gathered crowd seem to have of the drowned man?

  5. Does the poem suggest that they ever know the truth about him? Can you imagine the type of person he was from the poem’s descriptions?

    (Questions from http://www.poetryfoundation.org/resources/learning/core-poems/detail/46479)

Explain

20 Minute(s)

Move to slide 8. Students will use the Literature Graffiti graphic organizer to personally analyze the poem. First, pass out the attached Literature Graffiti handout and explain to students that they are to complete the "graffiti" section on the left first. This section is to be the cover art for the poem. If the poem was to be captured in one picture, what would that picture be? After the "graffiti" section is complete, they can complete the right-hand side of the page.

Encourage students to work collaboratively and share their creations with others.

Extend

5 Minute(s)

After students have completed the Graffiti Literature assignment, move to slide 9. Students will write a Two-Minute Paper answering ONE of the following: How has your life (either now or in the past) been like the drowning man? How is your life opposite of the drowning man?

During the writing, students must write the entire time. They are not allowed to stop writing. Assure students that the goal of the paper is to get ideas across, not necessarily to excel at spelling, grammar, and mechanics.

Encourage students to share their paper with an elbow partner, and ask for volunteers to share out with the whole class.

Evaluate

Show slide 10 and have students answer one of the following using the RAFT instructional strategy. Using the questions on the slide, have students write a well thought out response no longer than one page in length:

1. You are a news reporter writing the account of the man who died. Use quotes from the bystanders, emergency workers, and/or his friends.

2. Imagine that the drowning man has a computer and is allowed one last Facebook post. What would his status be? (The status must address: how the man got there, his last thoughts, and what he is thinking about when staring at the onlookers.)

Ask if any students would like to share their RAFT with the class. The publication stage of the writing process is often neglected, but is important to student efficacy.

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