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Sweet and Savory Writing

Descriptive Writing

K20 Center, Gage Jeter | Published: November 12th, 2024 by K20 Center

  • Grade Level Grade Level 7th, 8th
  • Subject Subject English/Language Arts
  • Course Course
  • Time Frame Time Frame 3-4 class period(s)
  • Duration More 125 minutes

Summary

This lesson is designed to shift students' attitude towards writing by guiding them to use descriptive and sensory language. Students begin exploring descriptive language by describing objects and brainstorming adjectives. Students then discuss examples and non-examples of descriptive writing and improve pieces of writing by adding sensory details. At the end of the lesson, students demonstrate their mastery of the topic by creating original compositions that feature descriptive imagery and sensory language. This lesson is currently aligned to eighth grade standards, but would be appropriate to teach in seventh grade with adjusted standards.

Essential Question(s)

What makes writing appealing to a reader? How can we, as writers, paint a picture in our readers' minds?  

Snapshot

Engage

Students describe objects to each other and draw the objects described to them then compare their drawings to the original items. Students then participate in an ABC Graffiti activity in which they brainstorm examples of descriptive language.

Explore

Students collaborate to read poetry and identify instances of imagery in the work.

Explain

Students assess the use of imagery in examples of descriptive writing.

Extend

Students write a rough draft of a narrative essay using imagery, then review another student’s work.

Evaluate

Students review the final drafts of their peers’ essays and evaluate the use of imagery.

Materials

  • Lesson Slides (attached)

  • ABC Graffiti Chart document (attached; one per station)

  • Sensory Language Frayer Model handout (attached; one per student)

  • Sweet and Savory Language handout (attached; one per student)

  • Narrative Essay Model handout (attached; one per student)

  • “Blackberry-Picking” by Seamus Heaney (linked; one per student, per group)

  • “Onions” by William Matthews (linked; one per student, per group)

  • “Folding Won Tons In” by Abraham Chang (linked; one per student, per group)

  • Household or classroom items (for example: plastic cups, playing cards, cotton balls, candles, etc.)

  • Brown paper bags

  • Writing utensils

  • Highlighters or colored pencils

  • Markers

Engage

25 Minute(s)

Use the attached Lesson Slides to guide the lesson. Introduce the essential questions and learning objectives of the lesson on slides 2–3, then display slide 4 and provide each student with a blank sheet of copy paper. Tell students to find an Elbow Partner and decide which person is Partner 1 and which person is Partner 2.

Give each pair one of the brown paper bags with an object inside. Instruct Partner 1 to describe what is in the bag to Partner 2 without revealing what the object is. Tell Partner 2 to draw the object on their sheet of paper while Partner 1 describes it.

Tell Partner 1 to use descriptive words that appeal to the five senses when describing the object. Explain that they should describe how the object feels, what it smells like, and if it makes any sound, before looking in the bag and describing what it looks like.

Tell Partner 2 to draw and ask clarifying questions as Partner 1 describes the object. Explain that once Partner 2 is finished drawing, both partners should examine the object and compare it to the drawing.

Tell students that once they are finished describing their object, they should trade bags with another pair, switch roles, and repeat the process.

Allow students time to complete their drawings, then display slide 5. Review the terms sensory imagery, kinesthetic imagery, and tactile imagery with the class and give examples of each term.

Transition to slide 6 and facilitate a whole class discussion using the questions present on the slide. Ask students to consider how they has to visualize the object during the “What’s in the Bag?” activity. Guide students to connect the activity to imagery in descriptive writing. Emphasize that this lesson focuses on creating descriptive and sensory imagery and integrating imagery into writing.

Take the objects from the “What’s in the Bag?” activity group the objects into four to five smaller groups. At each station, place one copy of the ABC Graffiti Chart handout.

Organize students into groups of three or four and give each group a different color of marker. Display slide 7 and introduce the ABC Graffiti activity to students. Inform students that each station includes groups of objects that were used in the “What’s in the Bag?” activity.

Inform students that they have two minutes at each station to brainstorm sensory words that describe the objects at their station. Tell students that they should work together to come up with multiple descriptive words then add the words to the ABC Graffiti Chart present at the station. Encourage students to use their knowledge of sensory language as they brainstorm. Once time is called, they should rotate to the next station.

Transition to slide 8 and start the two-minute timer. As students work, walk around the room to oversee the activity. Once time is up, have students rotate stations then restart the timer. Repeat the process until every group of students has visited each station.

Have students return to their seats at their original station and show slide 9. Tell students to read the words and phrases that others added to the ABC Graffiti Chart at their station and have them consider how the words relate to each other. Instruct students to invent a summary statement that synthesizes all of the information present on the chart. Read aloud the following example statement present on the slide:

“The words and phrases used to describe the objects at this station all relate to sound.”

Allow students time to work and walk around the classroom, assisting groups as needed. When it appears that most groups have finished their statements, invite groups to share out.

Explore

25 Minute(s)

Organize students into groups of two or three then display slide 10 and introduce the Categorical Highlighting activity. Inform students that they will read a poem as a group and identify sensory details in the work. Review the five senses they should identify in the poem and introduce the colors students should use to annotate each sense as follows:

  • Pink = Sight

  • Blue = Sound

  • Green = Taste

  • Yellow = Touch

  • Orange = Smell

Assign each group a poem and pass out one copy of the poem to each group member. Give each group a set of highlighters to use when annotating the poem. The poems for this activity can be found in the Materials and are also linked below:

Allow students time to read the poems and highlight sensory details.

Display slide 11 and introduce the Think-Pair-Share activity. Have students pair up with a partner that read a different poem, then instruct students to compare the senses they highlighted in their poems. Have students discuss how the sensory language they identified contributed to their understanding of the poem.

Once all students have discussed their annotations, facilitate a whole class discussion and invite groups to share out.

Explain

30 Minute(s)

Display slide 12 and distribute one copy of the Sensory Language Frayer Model handout to each student.

Review each quadrant of the Frayer Model and tell students to fill in each section with information that relates to sensory language as they watch the TED Ed video. Explain that students must identify characteristics of sensory language, create a definition of the term, and identify examples and non-examples of sensory language.

Transition to slide 13 and play the video How to Write Descriptively - Nalo Hopkinson.

Draw a Frayer Model on the board that matches the Frayer Model given to students. Conduct a whole class discussion over the video and invite students to share out their responses to each quadrant of the model. As students share out, fill in the model on the board and have students add their classmates’ responses to their own models.

Display slide 14 and distribute copies of the Sweet and Savory Language handout. Introduce the activity and explain to students that they will read and analyze the excerpts present on the handout. For each example, the will read the text then complete the following:

  1. Underline or highlight examples of descriptive and sensory language.

  2. Rate the effectiveness of the sensory language as high, medium, low, or none.

  3. Choose two low-scoring examples and rewrite them with more effective sensory language.

The instructions for the activity are also reproduced on the handouts.

Allow students to work individually or with a partner to complete the activity. Move around the room and answer any questions as necessary.

Extend

30 Minute(s)

Display slide 15 and introduce the following narrative essay prompt:

  • Write a brief narrative that describes a specific meal or food. Use at least five examples of sensory language and appeal to each of the five senses (touch, taste, sight, smell, sound) at least once.

Explain to students that they must create a narrative that incorporates imagery and sensory details that appeal to all the senses.

Pass out one copy of the Narrative Essay Model handout to each student. Read the narrative aloud and have students follow along on their papers. Explain that a narrative is a story and that students may choose whether to write their narratives in first or third person. Encourage students to use their Frayer Models and notes on sensory language to to assist them with writing their narratives.

Show slide 16 and introduce the brainstorming activity. Tell students to consider topics for their narratives and introduce the following prompts to help them choose a topic related to food. The prompt suggestions include:

  • The meal that changed everything

  • The best meal you’ve ever had

  • A food that brings back specific memories

  • A food that you will never eat again

Tell students that they have 10 minutes to brainstorm ideas for their essay. Explain that once they have an idea they like, they should also use the time to outline their narratives.

Begin the ten-minute timer on the slide and observe students as they work. If students finish their outlines before time is up, direct them to begin writing their narrative.

After students have had time to brainstorm, transition to slide 17 and introduce the essay requirements. Tell students that they will use these requirements to create a rough draft of their narrative essay. Emphasize that this rough draft is about students writing down ideas in words and they will refine it later. Allow students time to work on their drafts.

When most students have finished their drafts, display slide 18 and have students find a partner. Tell partners to exchange pieces and read each other’s work. As they read, they should identify instances of descriptive and sensory language. Have them also provide written feedback on their peers’ papers and verbal feedback on the use of descriptive and sensory language.

Allow students an adequate amount of time to collaborate with a peer reviewer. Once they have done so, have students begin the final drafts of their narratives. Encourage them to take the feedback they received into consideration as they write their final drafts.

Evaluate

15 Minute(s)

Once students have completed their final drafts, display slide 19 and introduce them to the second Categorical Highlighting activity. Have students trade papers with a partner and highlight examples of imagery that relate to the five senses, similar to how they annotated the poem from the Explore phase of the lesson. Ensure that each student has a set of highlighters or other writing utensils that correspond to the following colors used to represent the five senses:

  • Pink = Sight

  • Blue = Sound

  • Green = Taste

  • Yellow = Touch

  • Orange = Smell

Begin the five-minute timer slide and allow students time to review their partners’ papers. After time is up, have students return their papers to the original owners. Have all students turn in their highlighted final drafts.

Resources

Heaney, S. (1966). Blackberry-picking. Poetry Foundation. https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/50981/blackberry-picking

K20 Center. (n.d.). ABC graffiti. Strategies. https://learn.k20center.ou.edu/strategy/96

K20 Center. (n.d.). Categorical highlighting. Strategies. https://learn.k20center.ou.edu/strategy/192 

K20 Center. (n.d.). Elbow partners. Strategies. https://learn.k20center.ou.edu/strategy/116

K20 Center. (n.d.). Frayer Model. Strategies. https://learn.k20center.ou.edu/strategy/126 

K20 Center. (n.d.). Think-Pair-Share. Strategies. https://learn.k20center.ou.edu/strategy/139 

K20 Center. (2021, September 21). K20 Center 2 minute timer [Video]. YouTube. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HcEEAnwOt2c

K20 Center. (2021, September 21). K20 Center 5 minute timer [Video]. YouTube. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EVS_yYQoLJg 

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Matthews, W. (n.d.). Onions. Poetry Foundation. https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/poems/37525/onions

Spring, A. (1999). Folding won tons in. The Asian Journal. https://www.columbia.edu/cu/aj/archives/ajspring99/page04.html

TED-Ed. (2015, November 16). How to write descriptively - Nalo Hopkinson [Video]. YouTube. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RSoRzTtwgP4