Summary
This lesson on comma usage focuses on equipping students with a solid understanding of comma rules and their practical application in writing. Through interactive activities and examples, students will learn how to use commas to separate items in a list, set off introductory elements, join independent clauses, and indicate nonessential information. Guided practice exercises and group discussions will reinforce comprehension of comma rules, including the Oxford comma and comma splice. Hands-on activities and peer editing sessions will provide opportunities for students to apply comma rules to real-world writing scenarios, fostering confidence and proficiency. By the end of the lesson, students will have gained the skills to incorporate commas effectively into their writing, enhancing clarity and coherence while avoiding common errors.
Essential Question(s)
How does grammar enhance your writing? How can you use commas in your own writing?
Snapshot
Engage
Students review comma usage and influence with the strategy Grammatically Correct.
Explore
Students analyze comma usage and intent as they investigate a text through Why-Lighting and develop rules based on their observations.
Explain
Students will compare their observations to the comma rules using I Notice/I Wonder.
Extend
Students create a short story using commas in their text/dialogue.
Evaluate
Students answer lesson compatible ACT questions.
Materials
Lesson Slides
Pen/Pencil
Computer
Highlighters (optional)
Grammatically Correct Cards handout (attached; class set)
Cooking Hacks handout (attached; one per student)
Cooking Hacks Answer Key handout (attached; teacher copy)
What is a Comma handout (attached; one per student)
Sandwiched in Between handout (optional; attached; one per student)
BBQ Passage handout (attached; one per student)
Engage
15 Minute(s)
Use the attached Lesson Slides to facilitate the lesson. Begin by displaying slides 2-4 to present the title, essential questions, and the learning objectives in as much detail as needed.
Distribute the attached Cooking Hacks handout to every student. Display slide 5 and invite students to listen and follow along as you read the text through one time. Transition to slide 6 and introduce students to the instructional strategy Grammatically Correct to review what students already know about comma rules. Next, pass out one Grammatically Correct card to each student which will assign them a Comma Role (FANBOY, INTRO, or OXFORD). Each card provides information about a comma rule found in the passage you just read as a class. Then, have them reread and reflect on how their comma role is being used and what influence it has over the entire text. Provide a few minutes for students to read their description and develop their character as if they were that comma. Students should assume the role described on their card and talk to each other about how they influenced the text.
Have students get up and move around the classroom to “mingle.” Display slide 7; review the instructions and start the K20 10 Minute timer. Periodically (we suggest every 2-3 minutes), have students rearrange and talk to a new group of students. Repeat this process until students have had a chance to mingle for ten minutes.
Have students return to their seats and transition to slide 8 and review the different commas being used (see “speaker notes” at the bottom of the slide for color coding key and the attached Cooking Hacks Answer Key handout as an additional reference). Ask for volunteers to share some ways in which commas influenced the purpose of the text. Have a brief class discussion about how the text may be different if there were no commas or another form of punctuation was used. This can be used as an informal formative assessment to address any reteaching needs you may discover.
Explore
30 Minute(s)
Transition to slide 10 and have students access Commonlit.org and search for the short story, "Sandwiched in Between" (or you can assign it on Google Classroom). Students may need to create an account, but it’s free.
Next, display slide 11 and introduce the strategy Why-Lighting and ask students to highlight every instance of comma usage using the annotation tool as the class reads the story together. We suggest sharing the story on your screen and model using the annotation tool highlighting the first comma together. Then, read the story as a class. Afterwards, explain to students that they will discuss with a partner what ways the author uses commas and why.
Transition to slide 12 and have students turn over their Cooking Hacks handout to the side entitled “Your Comma Rules.” Have partners create at least three of their own rules for commas based on their observations from the story. Explain that they should include the rule with a thorough description and justification. These rules should be different from the ones seen with the previous reading.
Explain
20 Minute(s)
Pass out a copy of the attached What is a Comma handout to every student. Transition through slides 13-16 and review the rules and other grammar vocabulary in as much detail as you think necessary to clear up any further misconceptions. Have students highlight similarities and/or differences between their rules and the rules on the handout.
Move to slide 17. Using the Padlet you created (see Teacher’s Note in Engage) and the I Notice, I Wonder strategy, explain to students that they should reflect on what they noticed about the rules on the handout vs. their own rules as well as any questions. Display slide 18 and have students access the Padlet with either the QR code or typing in the URL. After about five minutes, have the Padlet on your screen and ask for volunteers to share out what they wrote or select a few from the Padlet to read aloud and discuss with the class.
Extend
40 Minute(s)
Display slide 19. Have students use the Book Creator tech tool by going to bookcreator.com, create a free account, then create a short story about a time where someone is invited to a family meal that might be different from what they are used to at home. The story can be factual or fictional. If time allows, encourage students to find images or create their own illustrations to add to their stories using Book Creator’s tools or scanning their own drawings. Using the Comma Rules handout instruct students to include commas from rules 5-8. Instruct students to then highlight the commas they used from the comma rules 5-8 based on this legend:
#5-Red
#6-Blue
#7-Green
#8-Purple
Once the students are finished with their stories, have them share the story with you for assessment. Students can share through Google classroom or save as a PDF file and upload to your LMS. If you use Google classroom, you could essentially make a digital library for your class sharing it with students to showcase their work.
Evaluate
20 Minute(s)
Display slide 20. Pass out the attached BBQ Passage handout and instruct students to read the passage independently and answer the questions. Give students approximately nine minutes to complete this task. This timing will support pacing in preparation for the real ACT test day. Use the K20 Center Timer on the slide and allow students to work silently. When the timer goes off, tell students to put their pencils down and stop working even if they haven’t finished answering all the questions.
Afterwards, use slides 21-22 to facilitate class discussion about the correct answers and their experience. Ask the students to identify which of the comma rules apply to each answer. Talk about what struggles students had, what was easy, what they did not know at all. Ask them to reflect silently on what they personally need to work on and how they think they can accomplish it.
Resources
K20 Center. (n.d.). Book Creator. Tech Tool. Retrieved from https://learn.k20center.ou.edu/tech-tool/610
K20 Center. (n.d.). CommonLit. Tech Tool. Retrieved from https://learn.k20center.ou.edu/tech-tool/2170
K20 Center. (n.d.). Grammatically correct. Strategies. Retrieved from https://learn.k20center.ou.edu/strategy/3555
K20 Center. (n.d.). I notice, I wonder. Strategies. Retrieved from https://learn.k20center.ou.edu/strategy/180
K20 Center. (n.d.). I Notice, I Wonder with Padlet. Tech-Integrated Strategy. Retrieved from https://learn.k20center.ou.edu/tech-strategy/2956
K20 Center. (n.d.). Padlet. Tech Tool. Retrieved from https://learn.k20center.ou.edu/tech-tool/1077
K20 Center. (n.d.). Why-lighting. Strategies. Retrieved from https://learn.k20center.ou.edu/strategy/128
Smith, E. (2019). Sandwiched in Between. CommonLit. https://www.commonlit.org/en/texts/sandwiched-in-between